You made some interesting points on the parking situation here at UF, it is a hassle having to spend a whole lot of time looking for a parking space and then having to run to class just to avoid being late. On rare occasions a student might not have gone to class because of being so late, so this system on paid parking could work towards UF students getting a parking space for once. My only question is where this parking place would even be with campus already full as it is.
I think your company would definitely be a success if you were to actually start it. Finding a parking spot on campus is definitely always a hassle, especially if were trying to get to class. A concern I had with your pitch is the way you introduced the problem: expressing it in a story telling way is a good way to help the listener really imagine and grasp it but if it's too prolonged, they might get bored before you even get to the problem. But hand movements are always a way to keep someone engaged, nice work!
What a fantastic elevator pitch! Your tone was great and your explanation was clear. I liked specifically that you spoke with a relatable, friendly voice. Your "imagine this" scenario was something many people can relate to. I would recommend a more concise version of the story, since many people already can relate to why it is terrible to not find parking, and focus more on the perks of your company. Well done!
You made some interesting points on the parking situation here at UF, it is a hassle having to spend a whole lot of time looking for a parking space and then having to run to class just to avoid being late. On rare occasions a student might not have gone to class because of being so late, so this system on paid parking could work towards UF students getting a parking space for once. My only question is where this parking place would even be with campus already full as it is.
ReplyDeleteI think your company would definitely be a success if you were to actually start it. Finding a parking spot on campus is definitely always a hassle, especially if were trying to get to class. A concern I had with your pitch is the way you introduced the problem: expressing it in a story telling way is a good way to help the listener really imagine and grasp it but if it's too prolonged, they might get bored before you even get to the problem. But hand movements are always a way to keep someone engaged, nice work!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic elevator pitch! Your tone was great and your explanation was clear. I liked specifically that you spoke with a relatable, friendly voice. Your "imagine this" scenario was something many people can relate to. I would recommend a more concise version of the story, since many people already can relate to why it is terrible to not find parking, and focus more on the perks of your company. Well done!
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